Wednesday 1 August 2012

Going to the Movies

WALT write a descriptive recount of one part of our holiday.

 Amazing movies

Delicious buttery crackling down my throat.
Fizzy bubbes rising up my neck.
Overflowing fiz.
Bursting burps out my nose.

1 comment:

Ms M said...

I love the descriptive words and onomatopoeia you have used in your poem. It makes me want to go to the movies and have popcorn and a fizzy drink!